Hi Dante 1. Um... I was really confused. Is there a way to test the air quality with moss? How did it fit with our research other than the filter buying part? I don't think it actually had anything to do with moss. 2. I liked how fast you got income. 3. I would definitely like instructions so I could know what the heck was going on... what do the buttons do and how much does it cost? How do you "use moss to test the air quality" like your ad says? And also there was a fatal error. :(
1. This game doesn't make a whole lot of sense, I'm not really sure what is what. 2. I could imagine this getting to be a really fun game if properly developed. 3. I would recommend fixing all errors and editing the info so it makes more sense. The mechanics are nice, but like I stated earlier it doesn't make whole lot of sense. I look forward to seeing the finished product. -Mason
Okay lets redo this: 1. There is a fatal error you may or may not want to fix. 2. I had no idea what I was doing as your instructions didn't really elaborate what I was supposed to do. 3. What are the weird gray bobby thing? I don't know what to do with it. 4. What are the buttons doing? -Rhiannon
info screen didn't tell me how to buy anything or even how to move. this game makes no sense since I cant seem to do anything. The pieces move around nicely so I am looking forward to good things.
i dident learn anything from your game because it made no sense but its a good game. your tutorial level dident work when i tried to start and when it goes to your first level it dosent make sense cause theirs no instructs. u could improve on trying to provide more info so people playing your game understand. -baelie
On the fun factor it is a 1 because nothing works. This game is semi informational but it doesn't carry the info throughout the game so i give it a 3. This game is very underdeveloped because nothing works so i give it a 3. I think that this game should have a tutorial level so you can learn the game. -EliH
FUN: 8/10, I liked your game but it could be better. The info screen was clear, and the labels on the buttons helped with that, but i think the pollution cam a bit too quickly, and i was confused on how to get to the next level because the moss tests didnt always work, EDUCATION: 7/10 I learned about moss tests and air tests and how air filters work, so that was good, but the facts weren't always clear to me DEVELOPMENT: 9/10 Everything seemed to work in the way it was supposed to, even if i didn't understand what they did. The moss/expensive tests seemed kind of arbitrary, and there was an error in the beginning but it didnt seem to do anything. I would try and fix that error because most people will freak out when they see an error and abort.
1. This game was a lot better than last time. I give this game a 9/10 for enjoyment because well-developed games like these are a lot of fun. 2. I give this an 8/10 in terms of education. It's a little difficult to understand the information, but once you get it, it makes complete sense. 3. I give this game a 10/10 in terms of development. It seems very well-developed, sprites are clear, and sounds are nice. I like the background music you used, and I like the beep whenever you click something. It almost makes it feel old. 4. I don't really have anything to say other than keep up the good work. The game didn't make any sense in the beginning, and I am glad to see that it turned into this. -Mason
1. Not boring because YOU CAN PLAY but not fun either BECAUSE OF ME so I will give half points 5/10. 2. Ish? You got it but I don't think the information was well placed. You did have it though so 10/10. 3. An 8. It was funish but the sprites looked a little funny the sounds where annoying and the interactions were good. 4. Boring so make it more fun. Maybe a speed up button like in Brinsley's game. -Rhiannon
Save the world from Pollution! Only you can stop the creation of pollution by the glass factory. Use moss to test the air quality.
Hi Dante
ReplyDelete1. Um... I was really confused. Is there a way to test the air quality with moss? How did it fit with our research other than the filter buying part? I don't think it actually had anything to do with moss.
2. I liked how fast you got income.
3. I would definitely like instructions so I could know what the heck was going on... what do the buttons do and how much does it cost? How do you "use moss to test the air quality" like your ad says? And also there was a fatal error. :(
Yes and the fatal error...
Deleteyour game was confusing and when i playe i got this:
ReplyDeleteERROR in
action number 2
of Step Event
for object deletiig_ob:
Error in expression:next_target.x
position 13: Unknown variable x
it was easy to relies how it contacted to our research but it was confusing so i couldn't find much internment
1. This game doesn't make a whole lot of sense, I'm not really sure what is what.
ReplyDelete2. I could imagine this getting to be a really fun game if properly developed.
3. I would recommend fixing all errors and editing the info so it makes more sense. The mechanics are nice, but like I stated earlier it doesn't make whole lot of sense. I look forward to seeing the finished product.
-Mason
Okay lets redo this:
ReplyDelete1. There is a fatal error you may or may not want to fix.
2. I had no idea what I was doing as your instructions didn't really elaborate what I was supposed to do.
3. What are the weird gray bobby thing? I don't know what to do with it.
4. What are the buttons doing?
-Rhiannon
info screen didn't tell me how to buy anything or even how to move. this game makes no sense since I cant seem to do anything. The pieces move around nicely so I am looking forward to good things.
ReplyDeletei dident learn anything from your game because it made no sense but its a good game. your tutorial level dident work when i tried to start and when it goes to your first level it dosent make sense cause theirs no instructs. u could improve on trying to provide more info so people playing your game understand. -baelie
ReplyDelete1 moss needs good air. moss is green, filters make clean air
ReplyDelete2 no
3 mabye fix error
i dont know what happed i was clicking on every block i saw and then i won i have no idea what the blocks are /mean and i just dont know
ReplyDeleteI learned nothing I understood nothing and the pink bottom makes you win automatically
ReplyDeleteOn the fun factor it is a 1 because nothing works. This game is semi informational but it doesn't carry the info throughout the game so i give it a 3. This game is very underdeveloped because nothing works so i give it a 3. I think that this game should have a tutorial level so you can learn the game.
ReplyDelete-EliH
I would like you to be more specific as to what doesn't work, because I am unable to find any errors in my game.
DeleteFUN: 8/10, I liked your game but it could be better. The info screen was clear, and the labels on the buttons helped with that, but i think the pollution cam a bit too quickly, and i was confused on how to get to the next level because the moss tests didnt always work,
ReplyDeleteEDUCATION: 7/10 I learned about moss tests and air tests and how air filters work, so that was good, but the facts weren't always clear to me
DEVELOPMENT: 9/10 Everything seemed to work in the way it was supposed to, even if i didn't understand what they did. The moss/expensive tests seemed kind of arbitrary, and there was an error in the beginning but it didnt seem to do anything.
I would try and fix that error because most people will freak out when they see an error and abort.
1. This game was a lot better than last time. I give this game a 9/10 for enjoyment because well-developed games like these are a lot of fun.
ReplyDelete2. I give this an 8/10 in terms of education. It's a little difficult to understand the information, but once you get it, it makes complete sense.
3. I give this game a 10/10 in terms of development. It seems very well-developed, sprites are clear, and sounds are nice. I like the background music you used, and I like the beep whenever you click something. It almost makes it feel old.
4. I don't really have anything to say other than keep up the good work. The game didn't make any sense in the beginning, and I am glad to see that it turned into this.
-Mason
1. Not boring because YOU CAN PLAY but not fun either BECAUSE OF ME so I will give half points 5/10.
ReplyDelete2. Ish? You got it but I don't think the information was well placed. You did have it though so 10/10.
3. An 8. It was funish but the sprites looked a little funny the sounds where annoying and the interactions were good.
4. Boring so make it more fun. Maybe a speed up button like in Brinsley's game.
-Rhiannon