You are in a cave, with no where to go. Lost, with no sight. Darkness surrounds you, eerie noises echo throughout the whole area. You walk blindly through the damp cave, suddenly, something fluttered infront of you. A bat.
It doesn't fit the research because there is no objective. I like how the room moves with you. I think the game could be improved with enemies and an objective.
OK so in general it works, i just cant do anything. The instructions are a bit lacking, and other than moving from location to location what is the point?
No relation to WNS so far and the sprite disappears on the 3rd level. The basic game instructions don't explain anything. Please add additional information to the game instructions page and make the sprites more relevant. The background is nice. Make more of an objective to the game, rather than just moving. -Julian
Aspen I love that your game is like a story kind of. Something you could work on is that the game is just walking maybe add some action to the game.Also it relates well.
I love you but your game needs some help. It was more like a story instead of a game and there wasn't a clear point to it. I would give it a 5 out of 10 for how fun it was because the only thing you do is just move across the screen. I give the educational part of your game a 6 because it talks a little bit about WNS and the education part is the only thing you have in your game right now. I give it a 5 for development because there still needs to be a lot of work done. I would just make sure you have a "game" part and work a lot on the development.
I enjoyed the story-line of the game. It seems like its missing about a week of development, but there is promise in what could have been. It doesn't really have levels past the tutorial. there were no action sounds, and it would have been nice to see the explorer actually walk in the right direction.
Nice backgrounds. Like how the background moves with you when you get close to the edge. Mechanics all working.
ReplyDeletethanks maxwell
DeleteYour game was really cool but the sprite didnt really do anything and it didnt relate to WNS
ReplyDeletelol ik i haven't gotten anywhere :P
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ReplyDeleteIt doesn't fit the research because there is no objective. I like how the room moves with you. I think the game could be improved with enemies and an objective.
ReplyDeleteOK so in general it works, i just cant do anything. The instructions are a bit lacking, and other than moving from location to location what is the point?
ReplyDeleteNo relation to WNS so far and the sprite disappears on the 3rd level. The basic game instructions don't explain anything. Please add additional information to the game instructions page and make the sprites more relevant. The background is nice. Make more of an objective to the game, rather than just moving.
ReplyDelete-Julian
Aspen I love that your game is like a story kind of. Something you could work on is that the game is just walking maybe add some action to the game.Also it relates well.
ReplyDeleteyour game is awesome you just need to fix some problems but other wise it is great!!!!
ReplyDelete^^^^^^^^^^^^ What Enessa said ;)
ReplyDeleteFun; 5/10
Edu.; 5/10
Develp.; 5/10
work on levels? i dont really know.
because it was sorta boring but it got funner
Deletebecause it only taught me like 2 things
because it had a good background
I love you but your game needs some help.
ReplyDeleteIt was more like a story instead of a game and there wasn't a clear point to it.
I would give it a 5 out of 10 for how fun it was because the only thing you do is just move across the screen.
I give the educational part of your game a 6 because it talks a little bit about WNS and the education part is the only thing you have in your game right now.
I give it a 5 for development because there still needs to be a lot of work done.
I would just make sure you have a "game" part and work a lot on the development.
I enjoyed the story-line of the game. It seems like its missing about a week of development, but there is promise in what could have been. It doesn't really have levels past the tutorial. there were no action sounds, and it would have been nice to see the explorer actually walk in the right direction.
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